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I am a year 3 learner at Tautoro School in Tautoro Northland, New Zealand. I am in room 4 and my teacher is Mrs Paraha.
Friday, July 31, 2020
Recount writing Flooding.
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Flooding
On Friday afternoon I went to my cousin’s house with my mum and brother. We waited for my cousins to come back home from Auckland. When they came back they saw the huge flood. They saw gushing and rushing flood water. The gushing rushing flood water damaged the road outside our house. It filled up everywhere right up to the first step of our house.
The flood water filled up the next door neighbours' paddocks. I couldn’t see the grass, I couldn’t see the road. Everything was covered with water. I felt worried. I had a lump in my throat and I was biting the top of my lip. My hands were shaking and my knees felt like rubber. Then my cousins were excited. They wanted to go for a swim in the flood water.
We asked our parents if we could swim in the flood. They said yes. When they said yes, we were jumping up and down. We were as happy as clowns. We were so excited. We got dressed as fast as we could. Nana saw us in white clothes so she said, “Get dressed in black because all of your white clothes will get paru stains on them and they will get very dirty.” So we got dressed in black. Dallas said, “Hurry up we wanna go for a swim.” When we got outside the flooded puddles looked really deep but it was shallow. So we had a swim. We were doing slides and splashing. First we ran to the first puddle and to another puddle. At the second puddle we slid on our puku. My papa felt worried because he thought the flood water was going to go in the house because it was on the 1st step so he grabbed a pump and sucked the water up. We said, “oooooooooo!”
Luckily he didn't suck all the water. Then we went to the driveway. It was flooded and it was damaged. My papa was worried about the driveway because he thought the cars couldn't drive in but luckily that didn't happen.
After our swim, me and Anetta-May had a shower because we were so freezing that my fingers were shivering and my legs felt like jelly. It warmed her up and me up too. I said for fun, “This is warming up my heart.” We had to wash our hair because we had grass in it. After that we said to Papa, “Why did you suck up all the water. We wanted to have another swim tomorrow.” “Too bad.” said Papa.
Then the rained slowed down. Finally the rain stopped. We all said, “Yay, it’s stopped raining!”
We hoped that everything would go back to normal.
Thursday, June 25, 2020
Recount Writing At home
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At home
On Saturday afternoon I went with my mum and brothers to our spa pool in our backyard.
We were having a nice soak in the lovely warm water.
It was so nice and warm because it was a very cold day. Should I get some snacks yes can I have a muesli bar and a yummy sandwich
Mum said, “What do you want Bron?”
Bron said, “A water and half a chocolate.
Mum said, “OK, coming right up.”
Me and Bron were jumping up and down in the spa
When Mum got our food, First I ate my yummy sandwich. It was yummy like a lolly. Bron drank his water. He was so hot but then the water was so cold that the water made him cool down. The chocolate made his tummy yummy. When he tasted the chocolate, he was happy like a clown. We ate our food. Then we got out and dried ourselves.
My mum said, “Wasn't it nice to have a soak?”
We said, “Yes.”
Then we played hide in seek in the house. My mum was in. Bron was hiding in our cupboard. I was hiding under .the bed. My mum found Bron first because the door was going to open. The door was opening because Bron couldn't breath. I was the last one to get found. Bron was in. On our last round of playing hide and go seek, Bron had to count up to 30. My mum hid by the curtain. I hid by the door where Bron couldn’t find me. Bron found me first. My mum got found the last. We finished our game and we
felt amazing. I was as happy as a clown and I was nearly smart as an owl. Next I said, “Should we play on the trampoline?” Bron and my Mum said, “Yes come on then let's go.” Then when we got on there, my mum was jumping the highest. The leaves were dropping like a feather on a bird. My mum and Bron were so tired that he stopped jumping. I said, “Should we get a drink?”
After that we went to see the birds. Me and Bron got to feed the birds. They were starving. My mum said they are really hungry. I felt hungry too. Finally I went to my room and had a story about the night blanket.
Wednesday, June 17, 2020
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